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Re: THE BED.
Outstanding piece of work. Wow. thats all i can really say. Wow. You gave the bed a life, a soul, a personality. In a sexual environment, you made the bed ...
Sep 3, 2008 -
Re: Messed Up Chapter 1
It does a good job of hooking the reader, however there are several points that read out awkwardly, mainly due to punctuation. "My house was large it was two stories ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: Doll
This work is one of the more abstract ones I've read, and it did a great job on keeping my attention. A rather sinister and daunting story about how one ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: Ours
This is wonderfully written. I think you did a spectacular job of hiding what Kenny was while still portraying that he is loved by the character and is comforting to ...
Sep 1, 2008
